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Here's a paragraph that sparked at least two plot bunnies with me and so I thought I'd pass it along and see who else got nibbled on by it.

He hurt. Oh, Gods, he hurt. Pain radiated through his body, blending with the ache of a stomach that has been empty for too long. He couldn't remember the last time he ate or even slept as he pushed himself to keep going, placing one foot in front of the other to escape the slaughter and senseless violence that had surrounded him and tried to pull him under. Barely healed cuts and gashes were rubbed by blood soaked clothing as he moved, adding to the pain in his body. Stumbling, he barely caught himself before he fell, and forced his weary body onward. If he fell, he wasn't going to be moving for a long time and he wasn't safe yet. He could still hear the sounds of fighting, yelling, and dying, but he wasn't sure if it was all part of his exhausted mind. Until he knew he was safe from the carnage, he had to keep moving.

Feel free to change the gender of the person or "Gods" to singular if it'll fit your story better.

Tazzy, Tazzy1@columbus.rr.com


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